Herrice's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[JENOVA EXODUS - Character Sheet]

She's super cool! Love her little mascots too ❤️

RikoandTako responds:

Thank you! She's been super popular on my live streams so I thought I'd make a concept sheet for people if they wanna do fanart aha

[Cornie Run]

Excellent for a first try! I can't quite tell what she's doing, though. Is she running or leaping?

DargonDango responds:

Ty!, she's doing both

[All2U]

Not too big a fan of Helluva Boss but I adore Stolas. This song broke my heart; really wish they'd release a studio mix of it.

You captured the moment splendidly. Great work ❤️

zDevilDude responds:

THX, I appreciate it!
Super pumped that you said I captured the scene, I was really trying to get it perfect.

[2/2: flashback]

... well that was a twist lmao

You've definitely improved in your panelling and pacing! Keep Up the Good Work!

EdgelordPirate responds:

Thank you!!!

[Erismon - Lineart]

This is going to sound totally nuts, but in school I made a Digimon OC that, while not visually precise, was the exact same idea as Herissmon. My best friend and I made our own Digimon story with our OCs that lasted for decades after we parted ways, something I still cherish to this day.

Then Digimon ReArise came out. Seeing Herissmon made me feel so ecstatic: as if my little Digimon partner had finally become canon. Better still, through the game, he became everyone's Digimon partner. This is why Herissmon is my favourite Digimon.

As for my old friend, his Digimon would become canon much later on, in the form of Digimon Seekers' Loogamon. I wonder if he knows...?

EdoNova87 responds:

Well, imagine when, in Digimon Liberator, they created a line for Impmon based on digimon that make noise and I created my own Digimon years ago called Screammon, Vibremon, Beliomon and Loudermon long before them XD

[A sailboat at dawn]

Beautiful! Incredible colours and super composition. Awesome work! ❤️

BalanArt responds:

Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it

[Aftermath]

Pretty good so far! You've put up two of the same page, though! The one where Jotun picks up the mouse.

Love how you adapted circus acts into a shounen story! Looking forward to the next chapter =)

EdgelordPirate responds:

Aaaahhh! Thank you for pointing that out!!!

[ANGEWOMON]

I can certainly see why! Gorgeous work! ❤️

AJRT responds:

thank you very much

[Super Alien Soldier mockup]

I adore seeing remakes like this!! Amazing development. Keep Up the Good Work!

ScepterDPinoy responds:

Thanks. Will do so.

[1/4: Lost in the Woods]

Interesting idea for an adventure! The colour scheme was definitely a good choice.

You used quite a lot of pages for an introduction, though. Try designing each page around a 3-Act structure (beginning, middle, end)! Pack as much information in the art as you can (world, character, motivation etc) and write its context through concise dialogue ("I'm Hero! I'm going to the Big Top!" etc).

Looking forward to future episodes! Best of Luck with the comic!

EdgelordPirate responds:

Thank you!!! I still have a few chapters before it’s caught up and I hope they show improvement in writing!!